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Friday, January 31, 2014

MAN FROM THE STAR ( FICTION ) ( NON-KPOP )


Author: Tanada Kanade
Starring: Patrick star, Mandarin (Iron man 3)



       In a century on the star planet , there lived a mysterious defender of the justice that very handsome named Patrick Star . He always protect the city from Mandarin , his enemy . Patrick loved Patrice, his childhood friend. But unfortunately , Patrick should stay away from Patrice for her sake.
        One day , Patrick’s feeling against Patrice known by Mandarin’s spy , so Mandarin sent his subordinates to invade Patrice and her family . Their house was destroyed before Patrick had come to help . Patrice's father died because of that incident . " Mandarin .. I will not let you do any further ! " patrick furious . Patrick gives a place to stay for Patrice and her family, and packed his luggage . " I 'll go to another planet . Keep yourself well . " patrick said.
With his aircraft , he flew around the solar system to find the furthest planet. " Earth .. " patrick smiled . He immediately launched his aircraft on that planet . However, the plane wobble a little bit , so he was stuck in the middle of the metropolis town called AMERICA . He passed a normal life as a detective for many years. His life was going well until a group of aliens invade the city . Yes. Mandarin and his subordinates . " I waited this moment for a quite long time .. " Patrick widen his smile,sip his americano and then change into his super suit . In less than 1 hour , Mandarin forces repulsed by patrick . Someone appear from the largest aircraft . Mandarin with arrogant face standing there .
" Long time no see , David " grinned Mandarin .
" Have you forgotten, friend ? Now, my name is Patrick. "
" Oh, sorry . " said Mandarin with his wide arrogant smile.
" Finally, you can chase me up here , Mandarin . What do you want ? "
" Still the same . Work for me , Dave . "
" Patrick . "
" Yeah I mean Patrick. "
"I waited for this war. Let us prove , whether you deserve to be my master . "
"Don’t be so arrogant,Pat. I was ever lost of the last century . , But not anymore . Try it if you could fight me and my subordinates ! Come to St.Amber 32 tomorrow afternoon . Prepare yourself to be my slave ! "
      Mandarin with his subordinates flew away without say anything more. The next day , as promised , Patrick came to that place. An old skyscraper stood firmly in front of his eyes . He began to enter the building . His opponent always decrease, but stronger every floor . When he reached the top of the bulding , Patrick surprised by Mandarin with Patrice beside him.
" Leave her ! This war is between you and me . "
" There are no rules . Let’s start . "
Giant creature appeared from behind an iron fence in the corner. He is the last opponent for patrick . But it seems that his power has been reduced very much because of his previous war. He let himself attacked thousands of time by that monster after tried hard enough to  fight against it.
" Patrick ! Don't ever call yourself a man ! Sissy ! " Patrice yelled on him.
Patrick starled . In this situatuation,Patrice should cheer on him . He was upset and wanted to scold patrice but that monster slammed his body quite hard . Slowly he got up , and with his determination to scold patrice he began to attack the monster with anger. He issued a secret weapon that fart bomb and threw it into the mouth of the monster that was out of breath . Instantly , the smell spread throughout the room . Patrick , Patrice , and mandarin are closed nose can still smell it . Monster was dead , unable to bear the stink bombs from Patrick. Now, three remaining person . Deftly , patrick said
" What's that ! " pointing Mandarin's backward .
mandarin suddenly look back . Patrick immediately click a button behind Mandarin's coat . At that moment , mandarin lying helpless . Actually, Mandarin was a robot and Patrick know it. After that , patrick forget his determination to scold patrice because he realized , patrice is what makes him winning this fight . Finally , they live happily as detective couple in America .

-the end-

Sebenarnya ini untuk tugas sekolah'-' karena jarang post, iseng saya post saja. Wish you enjoy reading it:3
 5 post terakhir akan berisikan karya teman-teman saya^^ nama disamarkan~ hope you enjoy reading it^^

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